My young nephews short story

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Spencer is aged about seven or eight. He lives with his parents in New Zealand.

When we met at my brothers 70th birthday recently Spencer was curious after holding in his hands the latest of my novels. An ambition was birthed that day.

That afternoon I became aware of this young lad writing his own story. When I asked what he was writing about doing he proudly showed me his story.

I suggested he wrote it as if it was a book; drawing a cover on the front and writing the words in the pages – which he did. (His manuscript is below)

He read it to me, proud as can be.

I asked Spencer what he would like to do with it, and he asked me to turn it into a book. Publishing it. Creating a cover. Naming him as the author.

Why not? I thought. Encouragement at this age just may be the very thing that will make this child excel and do something in his life that is uniquely who he is.

Today I worked on his story, added bits and enlarged the storyline, then sent it away for his parents to photocopy and staple it as a book.

Below is my version of his story.

Written by Spencer Ladds

February 2019

Published by Aunty Glennis

March 2019

The Mysterious Island and The Boy Named Jack

Once apon a time a little boy wanted to go fishing.

So he jumped into his canoe and paddled away to a good spot.

Then he spotted an amazing Island, so he paddled away to the island. It was amazing ….. …. because it glistened in the sunlight as if it was a mirage.

‘I’m going to check out what is on the island,’ Jack said.

Once he got there he wondered what the island was called, because nothing seemed real.

So, he tried to find someone to ask but he couldn’t find anyone else on the island.

‘I shall name it Lonely Mystery Island,’ Jack said to himself walking towards his canoe. But he couldn’t find the canoe. It had disappeared.

‘Perhaps the canoe was washed away by the waves as the tide had come in while I was exploring the island.’

Jack looked in every cove, behind every bush, but couldn’t find it anywhere.

‘It is no use,’ he thought, ‘I am stranded with no food. And something on the island isn’t friendly as this place feels spooky.’

Then Jack heard a loud, ‘Boo!’ and he leaped like a spring into the air before tripping over a log. Behind him he heard footsteps following him along the sand. Jack started running towards a palm tree. And he fell hitting his head on a tree branch.

‘Ouch,’ he said, rubbing the sore spot on his head before standing up again.

‘I’m out of here,’ he said, ‘as something is strange about this island.’

‘Boo!’ something shouted again, as Jack continued running along the sand; ducking and diving from whatever was hitting his body while he was running. It felt like small stones or peanuts.

‘Aagh!’ Jack said, reaching for something to hold to protect himself as he was now frightened; He picked up a palm leaf.

‘What was it that went boo!’ Jack shouted, ’is someone else here? I can hear you. You didn’t scare me, all I need is help,’ Jack shouted.

‘Help?’ a voice asked from near him, ‘Hehehe, you are a funny little boy.’

Jack held up the palm frond, listening. ‘I’m Jack. I need help.’

‘I need you as well Jack as I’m actually very hungry. Tell me, do you taste good, Jack the little boy?’

Jack realises he might be in danger, and says, ‘I must out run what-ever it is. Perhaps I can climb this palm tree and there I’ll be safe.’

And he did climb the palm tree.

While trying to climb the palm tree in his bare feet, Jack heard something strange – like someone laughing. It sounded like there was a monkey higher up the palm tree. Clinging to the palm tree Jack scanned the palm fronds to see what was laughing at him.

All of a sudden, coconuts began falling from the top of the palm tree.

‘Oh no, I am being attacked. Stop It,’ Jack called. ‘I am not food. I am a boy and I can’t leave the island because I have lost my canoe. Will you help me?

‘Hehehe’ was the only reply.

‘Are you a monkey?’ Jack shouted.

‘No, I am not a monkey,’ the voice laughed.

‘What are you then?’ Jacked asked.

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The End

Did you look at the hints over the following pages?

Written by Spencer Ladds and Aunty Glennis. – Well done Spencer. Do continue writing your stories. The End –

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How to survive a heart attack

From my sister, the surgical nurse and certified CPR teacher:

Please pause for 2 minutes and read this:

1. Let’s say it’s 7.25pm and you’re going home (alone of course) after an unusually hard day on the job.

2. You’re really tired, upset and frustrated.

3 Suddenly you start experiencing severe pain in your chest that starts to drag out into your arm and up in to your jaw. You are only about five km from the hospital nearest your home.

4. Unfortunately you don’t know if you’ll be able to make it that far.

5. You have been trained in CPR, but the guy who taught the course did not tell you how to perform it on yourself.

6. HOW TO SURVIVE A HEART ATTACK WHEN ALONE? Since many people are alone when they suffer a heart attack without help, the person whose heart is beating improperly and who begins to feel faint, has only about 10 seconds left before losing consciousness.

7. However, these victims can help themselves by coughing repeatedly and very vigorously. A deep breath should be taken before each cough, and the cough must be deep and prolonged, as when producing sputum from deep inside the chest. A breath and a cough must be repeated about every two seconds without let-up until help arrives, or until the heart is felt to be beating normally again.

8. Deep breaths get oxygen into the lungs and coughing movements squeeze the heart and keep the blood circulating. The squeezing pressure on the heart also helps it regain normal rhythm. In this way, heart attack victims can get to a hospital.

9. Tell as many other people as possible about this. It could save their lives!!

10. A cardiologist says If everyone who gets this mail kindly sends it to 10 people, you can bet that we’ll save at least one life.

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I am now writing as Annie Browne

It’s 2019 and I am venturing into self publishing.

Previously I published using a vanity press. They did a good job but it was expensive to publish the first two books.

Now I have ventured into self publishing and have republished the first two books of The Fortune Seekers Series under a new series entitled:

Journeys of the Fortune Seekers.

Book one is now entitled:

Bitter Sweet Lives

Book Two is now entitled:

Power and Authority

These novels have the same content as the previous series and are available as Ebook and also paper copies.

Where to buy:

Amazon, Kobo, Barnes and Noble, Google books, and other book buying sites.

Book Three is underway and will be published by my publishing company- Browne Publishers.

I am looking for a title for this historic novel which concentrates on the challenges of women when husbands desert them, don’t provide for their children and spend time in jail for drunken abusive behaviour. This situation is contrasted with a family where the women attempt to bring changes to the centuries old status where men ruled. Think – women getting the vote, the effects of World War One on families.

Any title ideas appreciated and acknowledged/recognised in the book if chosen.

I look forward to your comments and suggestions.

Glennis (pen name: Annie Browne)